Writing Report

One of my strengths is organisation, my reasons are I have writing grouped in basic paragraphs and the ideas are organized to make the story make sense. Another strength of mine is vocabulary because I am able to select words to enhance the meaning or mood.

Goals
At the start of the year my goals were punctuation; it is now even with others. My current goals are now  ideas and language/structure, I’m going to improve on them the same way I did with my goals at the beginning of the year. I will go to workshops related to my goals and practice them.

Example 

Prediction of the ghost of young nicks head.
I woke up and glared to my right and saw Eddie dozing away; wondering about the suspicious man and how he knew how to escape?.

At long last Eddie woke up, we then bolted down stairs to explore the caves once again. Joe was alarmed about going back to the cave where they almost died, while they were walking along the cliff they countered the suspicious man again, “what’s your name sir” he didn’t answer. Within the blink of an eye he was gone.

Suddenly the clouds engulfed them that hadn’t stopped the boys, “ code five in the commando rule book keep going” Eddie explained. Are they going to make it home this time?.

Mindlab

Yesterday we went to the mind lab and learnt about coding survo motor to water soil by coding it. My buddy and I worked hard and finally got it in the end.

Prediction of the ghost of young nicks head

Prediction of the ghost of young nicks head.

I woke up and glared to my right and saw Eddie dozing away; wondering about the suspicious man and how he knew how to escape?.

At long last Eddie woke up, we then bolted down stairs to explore the caves once again. Joe was alarmed about going back to the cave where they almost died, while they were walking along the cliff they countered the suspicious man again, “what’s your name sir” he didn’t answer. Within the blink of an eye he was gone.

Suddenly the clouds engulfed them that hadn’t stopped the boys, “ code five in the commando rule book keep going” Eddie explained. Are they going to make it home this time?. 

What I love about Gisborne

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My name is Taye. I’m from Gisborne, New Zealand. I go to Makauri School. It’s my last year here. 
I enjoy sports such as football, cricket, and hockey. My favorite subject is maths. My goals for writing is to add punctuation. I like all subjects and try to improve in everything by being better than before. 
I look forward to seeing how Seesaw works out through the year. I’m also looking to how the gardens work out at the end of the year.