One of my strengths is organisation, my reasons are I have writing grouped in basic paragraphs and the ideas are organized to make the story make sense. Another strength of mine is vocabulary because I am able to select words to enhance the meaning or mood.
Goals
At the start of the year my goals were punctuation; it is now even with others. My current goals are now ideas and language/structure, I’m going to improve on them the same way I did with my goals at the beginning of the year. I will go to workshops related to my goals and practice them.
Example
Prediction of the ghost of young nicks head.
I woke up and glared to my right and saw Eddie dozing away; wondering about the suspicious man and how he knew how to escape?.
At long last Eddie woke up, we then bolted down stairs to explore the caves once again. Joe was alarmed about going back to the cave where they almost died, while they were walking along the cliff they countered the suspicious man again, “what’s your name sir” he didn’t answer. Within the blink of an eye he was gone.
Suddenly the clouds engulfed them that hadn’t stopped the boys, “ code five in the commando rule book keep going” Eddie explained. Are they going to make it home this time?.
Hi Taye- Mr.S here. I really enjoyed reading about your goals and strengths in Writing. You know where you are at with your writing. Also your predictive writing on 'The Ghost of Young Nick's Head' was descriptive and thoughtful.
ReplyDeleteWell Done mate.
Thanks I used the the ghost of young nicks head because I focused on mostly on my recent goals.
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